Comments : Dream

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    I loved your poem they way you have attached your words wiht another line. take care
    5/5
    keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Tine

    Heya.. :) i really like this poem, your style of writing is very beautiful! i like the way how the repitition does not get boring, you keep the poem interesting. :) keep it up ! x

  • 12 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was a real heartfelt masterpiece and I liked how you pictured being a bride
    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 12 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    Aapne har larki ka sapna is hi shari main dekha diya hai..
    very nice job!

  • 12 years ago

    by all knight

    Good job

  • 12 years ago

    by pozinthenoise

    I loved ur poem...very well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wake

    Well congratz if it becomes true xD..
    but this was a great write...nicely expressed.

    great work :D

    ~Wake~

  • 12 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awwww, Your poems are so short yet so delicate and peacefull!! There amazing just like you are dear ^^ I shall speak to you soon and pleaseeee post new poems ^^ I want to read them all lol xxxx love you byebye Roxy

  • 12 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Awww..I really loved it! Yes, the wedding day, what a beautiful thought. Keep this work up, and hope the waiting is worth it!
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 12 years ago

    by David

    Great poem i liked it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Shauna

    Lovely!! Amazing writing and easily visualed! Great Work!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 12 years ago

    by Kacey Lynne

    Awe this is so cute! I love it! comment back.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohsin Armaan

    Such a Wonder Full Work u did!
    Keep Glowin Always!

  • 12 years ago

    by Farah

    I like this poem it cute

  • 12 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    InterestinG tO reaD, excitinG tO seE thE sounD oF youR truE knowledgE, alL iN alL, you'rE a lovelY poeT..... keeP uP youR writinG anD brinG morE excitinG poeM iN futurE... 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohsin Armaan

    As Usual api this is also one great poem of urs!

    ~Keep Glowin~

  • 12 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I think waiting is very hard thing to do but since it worths it then why not

    good job sis

  • 12 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Awesome job.. a joy to read

  • 11 years ago

    by Rohit Sapra

    This poem is very touching. Nicely written.

  • 11 years ago

    by Freedom

    I agree with others :) your writing style is nice.i like