I loved your poem they way you have attached your words wiht another line. take care
5/5
keep it up

Heya.. :) i really like this poem, your style of writing is very beautiful! i like the way how the repitition does not get boring, you keep the poem interesting. :) keep it up ! x

It was a real heartfelt masterpiece and I liked how you pictured being a bride
Keep it up,
Laura

Aapne har larki ka sapna is hi shari main dekha diya hai..
very nice job!

Good job

I loved ur poem...very well done!

Well congratz if it becomes true xD..
but this was a great write...nicely expressed.

great work :D

~Wake~

Awwww, Your poems are so short yet so delicate and peacefull!! There amazing just like you are dear ^^ I shall speak to you soon and pleaseeee post new poems ^^ I want to read them all lol xxxx love you byebye Roxy

Awww..I really loved it! Yes, the wedding day, what a beautiful thought. Keep this work up, and hope the waiting is worth it!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Great poem i liked it 5/5

Lovely!! Amazing writing and easily visualed! Great Work!

5.5**
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Awe this is so cute! I love it! comment back.

Such a Wonder Full Work u did!
Keep Glowin Always!

I like this poem it cute

InterestinG tO reaD, excitinG tO seE thE sounD oF youR truE knowledgE, alL iN alL, you'rE a lovelY poeT..... keeP uP youR writinG anD brinG morE excitinG poeM iN futurE... 5/5

As Usual api this is also one great poem of urs!

~Keep Glowin~

I think waiting is very hard thing to do but since it worths it then why not

good job sis

Awesome job.. a joy to read

This poem is very touching. Nicely written.

I agree with others :) your writing style is nice.i like