Such emotions with much thoughts..it was well penned!

keep it up!

I really liked this. Your flow is always so flawless. I love it. I can really relate to this and I can feel your pain. I like when I can relate to what I am reading it gives me a special connection not only to the writer but to the peice. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

My only complaint is the lines:

"If we had known of this
And done it all again."

It just feels a little off to me when I am reading, like it should be arranged a little differently. Other than that I thought you did a good job, I could feel the loneliness and the "what if" of it all. Nice work. Thanks so much for entering the contest.

Omg the ending was so deep
i swear its jus like real life