OH, Tim!!! This is hilarious! It was so fun to experience the stanzas one at a time as you were writing them. I don't know if I could have handled them all at once! ;)

Excellent Work!

I'm not shurr if it was supposed to be funny, like that person up there said, or sad.
i thought it was sad..............

Well penned you portrait here Sir! there are something inside you've written.... don't know why, only you know the answer... "In life there is a lot we must know, As it is guaranteed that, forever it will not last....My pleasure to read again your poems, keep them coming even though times sometimes never give a chance.... Best wishes! Bert.

Unique Poem.. This Is A Hot Issue.. Very Good Poem Here!!

5.5**
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Wow thats sad but pretty

Dang a very unique poem i quite loved it 5/5

Lol...This was hilarious! I especially liked the closing line, too funny!

Love ya, Holly