Beautifully penned free verse poem! I really adore the first stanza. The words you used really painted a clear picture in my mind, well done.

Btw. If you really feel this.. Don't think that everything is your fault.

Remember to smile :)
TC!
Thanks for the comment.

Loved this poem, is was awesome. i love the intesity in ur work, its the kind that ppl love and make them keep on their toes. well done. 5\5 i loved it.