Comments : If love had a first name

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Chel, what a beautiful expressed emotions you penned here, just something like i could say something.... it's something special....Brilliant! "If love had a first name, I will love the world the way it is, cause I can clearly see. That all the things I judge are done, by people just like me. So 'till the birth of peace on earth, that only love can bring. I'll help it grow, by loving everything."

    Best wishes, Bert.~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Chelseythis is beautific perfection, and it's exactly the way I feel about my fiance who is sitting right beside me. I read it to him and...okay, I'm at a loss for words. I love this so much, Chels!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tommy Stevenson

    Hi Chelsea, long time no see, I loved this poem, it has a great title, and every word flowed beautifully. Kudos and nice to be here again,. Timothy r

    P.S. isn`t it ironic you have Brady Quinn and my team has Troy Smith?..lol

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I am in awe of how you used the word 'verb' and made it fit!! A true artist, with words! As for the whole poem itself, it is so wonderful, and happy, and complete, like the love it speaks of. Fantastic.. truly fantastic. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Perfectly captures the essence of love in a very cute way....love it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    Wow, that was amazing ... also, so very true; to be that in love; to smile when ur partner smiles; to cry when ur partner cries, it's truely an amazing feeling ... good job! 5/5, no doubt.

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Hey chelsey! grea poem! very sweet and i love that way you structured it. keep it up! 5/5 xo.