Grant me safe passage to the land of lights
....nice line here, we all hope to pass into that light.
accompany me to the gates of what iseek, complementing lines, keep it up man.

Amazing poem once again so much feelings i love them xxx

Wow..so interetsing write
But if you capitalize the i's,it would be better

Keep it up,
Laura

Great poem 5/5

This is absolutely wonderful. By reading it, it gives me an inner peace. Enjoyable, keep it up. 5/5, kel.

This is very powerful...every word has such meaning..you're a very talented writer =]

This is very powerful...every word has such meaning..you're a very talented writer =]

This is very powerful...every word has such meaning..you're a very talented writer =]