Comments : Lost Lover

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem , well written and it shows that you truly loved someone and it is true , that it hurt like hell, yet we must do as you said , pick our selfs up and move on , because thats what the other person would have wanted you to do , great job on this , keep it up your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "I guess i must wait till my time is through,
    And every day i still miss you.
    We will meet again, for you are my lover,
    i told you, i love you, you and no other."

    What a heartbreaking poem. Losing a love is one of the hardest things to get over, because when you think you have, the tiniest thing brings it all flooding back.
    Glad to see it hasn;t affected your writing though!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Ha ha thanks for the hugs hellon lol!
    I have moved on from this, but not forgotten and sometimes you just get to thinking, and then i write and feel all better. Leave your poor boy alone ha ha!!

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awe Kelly sometime we all feel like that, sometimes we all cry, its what makes us human, :) i hope you're ok and remember im always here :) my sholder is ALWAYS free for you :) as for the poem, wow! 5/5 :))

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    I think this is a really good poem.
    itz sad. but so sweet at the same time. :]]
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dr of Bishonomics

    Could really connect with this, there's nothing that hurts more than a lost love but never fear there will be another. keep reaching for the sky 5/5