Wow that was a twist i didn't expect.

your servant:
david

DOUBLE WOW!!!
It's so sad,and it's very good.

A powerfully sad message within your words.... One needs to carry on with life, memories are good to have but don't dwell, carry on and live....

Wow this poem is simply amazing. i really liked it a lot. it had so much emotion in it. what a great job you did writing it. 5/5

~Kristina

Wow ur poems are all very long i llvoe them

Girl this poem is really good... not all poems have to rhym.. honestly i think the ones that dont rhym are the best cause when u try to rhymn it.. you over think the emotion and its less powerful.. but this one is really good