This reminds me of Ion Dissonance...

HOly hell talk about goosebumps!

I like the poem,so well written i love then end hehehe

Awesome! Reminds me a bunch of my old 2005 murder poems. I have a bunch for you I bet you'd like. :) 5

Wow...that was very good. kinda funny to me...i donno why im into that kinda stuff . VERY GOOD tho! KEEP IT UP!

BabyGurl

I like it. at first it seems like ur auditioning for a killing role whn you said "choose me, I'll overshadow any past specter". you discribe your self in a way thats suppose to scare people but its kinda gives you a little giggle. but i like it. if this was part of a movie, i would walk out remember it.

Omg i fukin love all ur poems there great keep it up lol

stacey xoxoxoxoxoxox

Oh I just loved it, it was amazingly enjoyable dark tale. Beautiful but in a disturbing way. Funny i found it. Putting it on my favs. I only wish it was longer. 5/5 Might want to consider capitalizing in the needed areas throughout the poem or not at all since it is a throwoff if you simply pick and choose which stanzas to capitalize....

The pocket fiend!

OH I loved this...beautifully written and still disturbingly dark nontheless.
Love the ending, blunt and powerful, and it made for a huge effect on the whole poem.
Just...beautiful.

"even killer" << Even a killer?
I noticed the contracted [[is that the word?]] I's are capitalized, but others are not.. Lol.

Well, I really liked this poem. Quite deep and dark. I must say, I had to look behind me afterwards. Lol. :| I'm weird like that.

Another wonderful poem, darling. I don't believe it has a thing to do with killing and scary movies. But who am I to say? You might like the idea of it all. Lol.

I kind of hope not, though...

Wow ok so you scare me.

This poem dazzles me in a good way. The imagery, the organization and the rhymes all fit together! 5/5

Haha that is an amazing poem it really makes you wonder if your really behind me. I actualyl looked LOL! Its a thiriller all right.
The beginning kinda got me exited seeing as I love to get scared =P xxxx Much love from Roxy

You've succeeded in getting a frightening vibe around this piece, but if you would have corrected your grammar it would have been way more effective in scaring me. The 'phones and computers' line was quite creepy, like Date Line or something, lol. Anyway, I think the poem could be improved, but it's a creative piece either way. Nicely done.

Take care,

~Richie

Honestly i dont like to read dark poems....i cant relate lol ^_6 but that piece was nice...5/5 sorry for late comment and vote.....

Freakish...lol
great poem though
love it!

A freaky ambiance were perfectly portrayed in this poem... and it was nice. got nothing more to say since it's flawless poem. u deserve 5/5.

This is another amazingly written poem. you really are an amazing poet. 5/5

Kalee

Wow! that was amazing! i loved it, its freaky and and wow! lol
laura

Wanna play a game...lol jk.. i love the way it ended it was AWSOME! nice flow keep it up
5/5 always
Kate~