Those Deceitful Eyes...

by DeathlyAmore   Sep 12, 2007


I gaze upon your evil glare,
with tortuous lies that deceive me.

To believe your eyes whom do not care,
To abolish my heart and kiss the earth...

I know that hollow look in your eyes,
meaningless words of "I love you"s.

Thinking I might be fooled by your awesome lies,
Stop!, stop... stop deceiving me with those eyes!
Don't lie to me...
Do not...
Deceit me with your sparkling, ever glaring eyes...

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Poem to interpret

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Main Idea, Plot, & Thesis;

"I look in your eyes while you tell me you love me...
You make it seem so true...
Even though I know its all a lie...
Still those eyes are so deceiving."
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"I shall always and forever be..."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    O_o.
    Wow. I wish I knew what was going on with you... :/ Are you okay?

    The poem was wonderful-fabulous-terrific-marvelous- & any other word I can think of. :]] 5.5

    - Steph <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikki

    This poem rocks. You don't know how much i understand it at this time but at the same time y if you know the "i love you's are meaningless" Can't you let your love for that person go. Well I mean me not u but excellent poem. It hit home for me. Great Job!