Hey, great poem. good job.

your servant:
david

Great poem. I loved the hidden meaning in it. Sometimes no matter how hard you try or how much you want to you just can't let go. There's just always something stopping you...It's really good though, I added it to my favs.

I really like this you showed so much emotion without saying i am angry but you brought it out i loved it. your gifted too.
:)