Comments : Debris Of A Wilting Faith

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Great write!!!
    keep up the good work.

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Shama

    Hey Wake....Wat can I say..... Wow!

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    =O!!! WOW!
    You say i have imagery? Your amazing Sometimes I really wnat to know what lerks beyond your mind.
    Just to know what you are thinking whilst writing these poems ^^ Thank you for your comment once again xxxx Roxy

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    Great emotions in that one.


  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Another excellent piece- I like the semi-rhyme/structure. The wording and imagery are fantastic, and such deep meaning behind all this! Love the title.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The structure works with this one. Imagery worked well with it and was effective. Words were chosen well to create the effectiveness and it flowed rather smoothly throughout. Strong beginning which grabbed attention even the title was attention getting.

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I LOVE your style!
    I LOVE the words you choose!
    I LOVE what you choose to write about.
    I LOVE the rhythm and flow of your work!
    I LOVE your poems, I can always relate!
    I LOVE this one b/c it's AMAZING
    So phenomanal.
    You TOTALLY deserve it!
    I have to read this again...
    lol It's truly amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    I really awed by this amazing poem.Such intense description is not everyones frontier.Wondeful job pal. keep up.


  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, wow, WOW!!! Simply amazing, it is so powerful and this form of your piece is very effective. I like every line, you created incredible tone. You should be proud on this poem, well done! I love it, it is so unique and superbly written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Beautiful piece of poetry do i see here i luv how you put your words together and made them flow from one til next, fantasic work my friend xox lithium

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Wow cid.. amazzing... hats off dude.... you just broke evey baariier.. i have no wrds to describe it.. all i cn say is tht its just... toooo amazing.. gr8 wrk...
    especially the topic.. u chose.. the title so strong... gr8 wrk...

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Ok, brilliant poem mate. This flows so beautifully, and is yet so powerful. A truly great read.

    "And when you stumble in the darkness
    ... do you hit the ground?
    Or do you feel nothing but air,
    ... and keep on falling down?"

    I think everyone can relate to that stanza, at some point every person will feel that way!
    5/5 - Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nandiix3

    Wow. The wording was incredible. The questions in this poem, were quite interesting, but they truly make you think. 5/5

    Nice work