Great write!!!
keep up the good work.

God bless u

Hey Wake....Wat can I say..... Wow!

=O!!! WOW!
You say i have imagery? Your amazing Sometimes I really wnat to know what lerks beyond your mind.
Just to know what you are thinking whilst writing these poems ^^ Thank you for your comment once again xxxx Roxy

Great emotions in that one.

.:Katelyn:.

Another excellent piece- I like the semi-rhyme/structure. The wording and imagery are fantastic, and such deep meaning behind all this! Love the title.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

The structure works with this one. Imagery worked well with it and was effective. Words were chosen well to create the effectiveness and it flowed rather smoothly throughout. Strong beginning which grabbed attention even the title was attention getting.
~Faith-less

WHAT WHOA
I LOVE your style!
I LOVE the words you choose!
I LOVE what you choose to write about.
I LOVE the rhythm and flow of your work!
I LOVE your poems, I can always relate!
I LOVE this one b/c it's AMAZING
So phenomanal.
1,000,000,000,000,000/5
You TOTALLY deserve it!
I have to read this again...
lol It's truly amazing.

I really awed by this amazing poem.Such intense description is not everyones frontier.Wondeful job pal. keep up.

Chavii.

Wow, wow, WOW!!! Simply amazing, it is so powerful and this form of your piece is very effective. I like every line, you created incredible tone. You should be proud on this poem, well done! I love it, it is so unique and superbly written.

Beautiful piece of poetry do i see here i luv how you put your words together and made them flow from one til next, fantasic work my friend xox lithium

Wow cid.. amazzing... hats off dude.... you just broke evey baariier.. i have no wrds to describe it.. all i cn say is tht its just... toooo amazing.. gr8 wrk...
especially the topic.. u chose.. the title so strong... gr8 wrk...

Good job.

Ok, brilliant poem mate. This flows so beautifully, and is yet so powerful. A truly great read.

"And when you stumble in the darkness
... do you hit the ground?
Or do you feel nothing but air,
... and keep on falling down?"

I think everyone can relate to that stanza, at some point every person will feel that way!
5/5 - Nice work.

Wow. The wording was incredible. The questions in this poem, were quite interesting, but they truly make you think. 5/5

Nice work