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Woot :D

my fav. lines "Not Finished LoL" ..such brilliant imagery.. aah.. a marvelous write ,aye XD

no..seriusly , like the 1st stanza ..waiting to see how it ends up :D
i knw u'll do good...u always do :D

~Wake~

'make piece and love '

='] .. wowie :D .. a superb poem with a superb message put superbly accross,,
amazingly expressed and a damn good write..

love your work.

~Wake~

Aww really strong message. It's horribole that it all has to go on, but worse is that people just doesn't understand or care about other people who have home and people that care about them. I really like the you brought up that. very very sad and also you have an amazing imagery in here that captures readers mind.
Flawless.
5/5

I agree totally with you...well done once again 5/5

Thats awesum. U definantely deserve a 5