Good poem. Wonderfully written. This is such sad write but very sweet and touching. I don't know what you're feeling but I can only imagine how hard it is to lose a dad and I want you to know that if ever you need to talk, just PM and I'll be there for you. 5/5

Take Care && Thanks for your comment.

-Shannon <3

Great poem keep up the good work

I can totally relate to this. My dad died last January. My poems On Angel's Wings is similar if you want to check it out.

Thats deep! i like it!

Wow great poem....
man sorry 4 ur loss 2...
it must sux...

Awe. im sorry about your dad. :[[
but this is a really sweet poem. :]]
5/5.

Great poem. so sorry about you dad

Wow this was really great, keep it up,
i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
Polaroid
p.s GREAT JOB

Wow! this is great x 5/5

My father was my first best hero, just like yours. I like what you said to yours. You got the message across, that's why you got the 5.