Comments : Tombstone Daddy

  • 14 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Jenni, I want to cry! What a sad poem! The title was very unique as was the poem. Too many people are being killed fighting this war. It's so hard to imagine the number. This poem was beautiful and sad at the same time. No wonder it was nominated! Keep it up
    Take Care
    <3
    Ciao

  • 14 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    This poem was amazing. i mostly like the last four stanzas. wow... i think that it is a great topic to write about. it was breathtakingly beautiful. i know that this is a sad poem, but it really is beautiful. i think that it was amazingly written... great job

    1000000/5

    but i cant rate that so i give you5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    I'm still wondering if the narrator see's herself in the little girl, but either way, or maybe even because of this fact, I thought this poem was pretty awesome. It used some vivid imagery and was simply easy to read, because of your rhyme and word choice. The ending wasn't paticularly strong, but the excellent descriptiveness in the stanzas before make up for this lacking.

    You have some clear and beautiful skill, keep at it.

    Farewell, (I'm guessing) Jennifer?!

    =]

    ~Richhieeee>

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow! This is sad and so beautiful at the same time. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by David

    Great poem, the emotions, the end. i loved it

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle

    That poor little girl...

  • 14 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The emotion in this piece is AMAZING. I think I got a little teary-eyed at the end. It was so sad and the vivid descriptions made it a very powerful read. There were a few lines in the begining that threw off the flow a little, but that doesn't even matter lol, it's probably just me anyway. Great piece, very gripping. 5/5

    marcella

  • 14 years ago

    by chelsea

    Very good.i like this poem.very sad.it really made me cry.so cute.very sad.loved it.5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    Ohh how sad
    great poem though (Y)

    5/5
    louii

  • 14 years ago

    by krystal

    I absolutely love this poem especially the end<333

  • 14 years ago

    by krystal

    I absolutely love this poem especially the end<333

  • 14 years ago

    by ILoveHim

    My dad died a few years back and i know exactly how this feels. to be so alone and without your daddy you feel like you're no one. i know this feeling because i lost my dad and thats a feeling of emptiness that will never leave my heart.

  • 14 years ago

    by melina

    Amazing<3

  • 14 years ago

    by shngain

    Well done...really touching..5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    My heart ached by the end of this poem, there was so much emotion in it and it kept me in suspense until the very end! Beautiful!

    Brooke<3

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Beautifully haunting.. you have done an excellent job with this piece. Well done. xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Mahlah

    Wow this poem is rally sad i lmost cry but i love th way you describe the poem i love it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow...that was very sad and touching...very well written...amazing job....~*~Cindy~*~

  • 14 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    My god!
    one of the best poems i have evver read!
    added to my favorites.
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Katie

    What a beautiful and touching write. You have portrayed loss to a child so well. It is hard for adults to come to terms with, but children must find it so, so devastating.
    Well done
    K xx