Oh gosh... tears.. :( this is VERY VERY good. I LOVE IT... on my faves xD you should enter my contest, this is where it is
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Aww!
So touching!
So emotional!
I'm crying!
Great poem
I feel really bad for that lil girl :'(

It's so beautiful that it's sad! I'm practically crying now! awesome poem....."sniff"...god u are so good at this

5/5

Such a sad poem, a loss is so hard to deal with. Writing about it must have made you feel really sad. The flow was great in this one as always nice job xxx alex xxx

Awwwwwwwwww beautiful and totally sad and amazing! ahhh your good lol of course you are. 5/5 duh lol

This is such a wonderful poem.......It is so sad but it puts you in the little girls position...Great job

Great poem i really liked it alot

Wow...I was not expecting that. that made me cry in the middle of english class!! GrEaT JoB!!!!!

When you read a poem, like that you reallycan't be critical, its impossible, that was very well written, and very very sad. good job

I love the way you write your poems, cause they make sense. This is an awesome poem, and i love the title you gave it. It got my attention to read it. And i loved it...Great writing!!

Oh my god this poem was so sad. I liked how you took such a small image but made it so powerful. The reader was able to see the sadness but also confusion of the little girl as she sat at the tombstone. And that's something that a lot of poems miss. For when someone dies little children aren't able to understand whats happened but in this poem you showed the confusion and the sadness. I also liked how you made the child's lines short and simple while the descriptive lines were more complex. The only critism I have is I would add some punctuation at the end of the lines. Over all nice work.