Jenni, I want to cry! What a sad poem! The title was very unique as was the poem. Too many people are being killed fighting this war. It's so hard to imagine the number. This poem was beautiful and sad at the same time. No wonder it was nominated! Keep it up
Take Care
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Ciao

This poem was amazing. i mostly like the last four stanzas. wow... i think that it is a great topic to write about. it was breathtakingly beautiful. i know that this is a sad poem, but it really is beautiful. i think that it was amazingly written... great job

1000000/5

but i cant rate that so i give you5/5

I'm still wondering if the narrator see's herself in the little girl, but either way, or maybe even because of this fact, I thought this poem was pretty awesome. It used some vivid imagery and was simply easy to read, because of your rhyme and word choice. The ending wasn't paticularly strong, but the excellent descriptiveness in the stanzas before make up for this lacking.

You have some clear and beautiful skill, keep at it.

Farewell, (I'm guessing) Jennifer?!

=]

~Richhieeee>

Wow! This is sad and so beautiful at the same time. 5/5

Great poem, the emotions, the end. i loved it

That poor little girl...

The emotion in this piece is AMAZING. I think I got a little teary-eyed at the end. It was so sad and the vivid descriptions made it a very powerful read. There were a few lines in the begining that threw off the flow a little, but that doesn't even matter lol, it's probably just me anyway. Great piece, very gripping. 5/5

marcella

Very good.i like this poem.very sad.it really made me cry.so cute.very sad.loved it.5/5

Ohh how sad
great poem though (Y)

5/5
louii

I absolutely love this poem especially the end<333

I absolutely love this poem especially the end<333

My dad died a few years back and i know exactly how this feels. to be so alone and without your daddy you feel like you're no one. i know this feeling because i lost my dad and thats a feeling of emptiness that will never leave my heart.

Amazing<3

Well done...really touching..5/5

My heart ached by the end of this poem, there was so much emotion in it and it kept me in suspense until the very end! Beautiful!

Brooke<3

5/5

Beautifully haunting.. you have done an excellent job with this piece. Well done. xx

Wow this poem is rally sad i lmost cry but i love th way you describe the poem i love it!

Wow...that was very sad and touching...very well written...amazing job....~*~Cindy~*~

My god!
one of the best poems i have evver read!
added to my favorites.
5/5

What a beautiful and touching write. You have portrayed loss to a child so well. It is hard for adults to come to terms with, but children must find it so, so devastating.
Well done
K xx