My love
I want to be with you
And call you my own

My friend, I love you
And I hope you feel the same way too.
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Love the ending lines. i wish i could hear it though. very sweet and beautiful words for a friend and/or lover. I loved it. 5/5
I missed your stuffs!! =]

` Glenduh =]

Great as ever.

God bless u

Aww, this is simply beautiful! I love your choice words..and the flow is excellent!

5.5**
<33

Thank you for your wonderful comment =)

Lol, and btw I really like your name..its cool.

It was nice and long, and I can tell that it was meant to be a song- and it would make a good song, too.

Awesome song! Really, I like the flow of your words. just the visuals your words give are great too!

This is so sweet, and wonderfully written.
I could hear the melody in the words.
A wonderful song to those who matter
in your life. Heartfelt piece. I loved it.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I like it as a poem, it kind of has this beat going on with it.
I'm not quite sure if I'd like it as a song because I don't really care for songs that repeat themselves, but who knows until I hear it right?

Overall, you did a great job, babe. I really, really liked the flow of the poem, it was perfect. The words seemed to be correct, of course. You've been doing this for years.. So, I knew it would be just about perfect before I read it.

I'm glad, though. (:
Keep it up, babe.

Oh, if only i could hear it as a song. =D
a wonderful poem.
keep it up!
Kat x

If i had a cd with this song i'd dedicate it to my girl.YOU NEED TO MAKE A RECORD!!! lol great poem 5/5

Though obviously a song, this works well as a poem also (as many songs do). I like the my friend phrase as love is so much stronger when based in friendship. The wording on this though somewhat simple (which is meant as a good thing) nonetheless carries such deep, heart-felt emotions. An excellent piece that truly says so much. So are you going to record this as a song?

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

This was so sweet.I could tell that it was well thought out and extremely sincere. It would be awesome if you would really put some music to it and everything.10/5 ^_^

<3Amber