Comments : Him.

  • 13 years ago

    by Xx soulful poet xX

    Wow bomb i love it 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I swear that this is the best, well written, truest, once again BEST poem I've read that goes along the lines of this subject. It was beautiful and I can totally relate. 5/5!
    ~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~

  • 13 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Aww lotsa girls can relate to this. you did a great job with this. keep it up =) 5/5

    ps thanks for commenting my poem, it means a lot that you took the time to read my work =) <3

  • 13 years ago

    by kla

    I LOVE THIS BABE AWESOME

    i heart the line

    with wishin on everystar,11:11 and four leaf clvoer i love that i can relate<333

    <33
    k

  • 13 years ago

    by Tylor

    Whoa, great, fantastic, wonderful poem, the rhyming is thought out very well, and it connects with the rest of the poem, every line, is written very, exceptionally well.
    -Tylor

  • 13 years ago

    by ABake

    This was adorable. I really liked the "bouncy" feel that I had while reading it. The emotions expressed were very true.
    Great job!

    Amber...