I like the idea of the piece. I would use "make" instead of "pick" in the line "pick a good choice" I might also drop the "for" in "survive for life" It just feels like there should be another stanza or soemthing, I can't say what for sure, just feels like something is missing, but I enjoyed it.

Very deep and greatly written. I like the choice of words in the poem and the topic is great.
My favorite stanza is:

-Face the dilemmas,
make love and peace,
struggles of life,
the wall of worries,-

Keep up, 5/5 from me

I don't think there should be a comma after life in the last stanza. Other than that, I think this is a great poem. The word choice was nice and I liked the concept. For such a short piece, it holds a lot of meaning.

marcella

I really like this poem, it's short and to the point but it carries a really good message. It's got a lot of good life lessons in it and it flows wonderfully. 5/5 from me. ^^

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Wow real things about life
You explained them so smoothly
Keep it up,
Laura

I like this one very much, i like the way you explained life, and the strucutre of the poem is good and it has a natural flow , and the rhyming never seemed forced

"Face the dilemmas
make love and peace
struggles of life
the wall of worries"

favortie stanza ^^

a well deserved 5/5

This one I liked a whole lot better. It flowed great and really made a lot of sense. In so little words you made your point and really stuck it to the reader. Great job! 5.5
Ciao

GREAT STYLE GREAT MESSAGE

This was BRILLIANT! I totally loved this. It is very inspiring and inspirational. Again, you did a great job writing. You have amazing talent. 5/5

~Kristina