Great Poem!

5.5**
<3

Thanks 4 your comment.
I really like this poem you wrote =)
Altough it's sad.. no one can wait forever. **

Beautiful! its so well written and it has the most lovely rhythm to it, slow yet beautiful, its a really lovely poem, i love it!

Awwwwwwwwwww dats so cute n sweet
very romantic heheh
gd work! :)

This poem was really good. i liked it a lot. you are a talented writer. 5/5

Aww! really cute poem you did an amazzing job 5/5 keep it up!!!

Great Poem!
keep it up
-Lisa

Awww aww aw! that is like totally cute and sad and wonderfull! lol. i liked it alot and i can relate. i hate how the ppl you love/like always end up with someone else that isn't good for them at all and you could be much better........ =((

Good luck hope you get her in your arms love the poem very meaning full...5/5

Aww this poem is so sweet...
5/5!

Very well written.
I especially like the last verse.
5/5