Awesome write! flows was great and the rhymes were not forced.
i could relate to this write as ihave beenthrough relationships that did not work cuz i was in love with another. being apart from the one you love is tough...but who kows what the future holds>

Oh sorry jus one thing i forgot...

Two months pasted,
Somehow we just couldn't last.

i think you meant to write

Two months passed,
Somehow we just couldn't last.

Dam this one is good. i like it sounds like this guy was a reall penis for not trying to make it work with u, well piece and keep writing

Wow well at least he loved you my ex i loved but she just used me 5/5

Awehh. The emotion put into this is so powerful. Every line is so personal to you, but yet, many of the lines others will be able to relate to as well, which is always a good thing. Great job.

5.5
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Excellent. keep it up. :)

This is a very qood poem.
I can relate.
I qive yu a 5/5.
Please read & comment mine.
Thanks.z

I love it.
I espically love how you dont say it from your point of view nessairlyy but how you kind of say it from the other guys..
all n' all it was wonderful.
I know my comments aren't as long as the one's you leave me..
(Sorry about that)
But I'm trying.=]
again its very good.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey

Very inspiring. I'll kill myself if I'm not give it 5/5!!!

Great job, i can totally relate...and i love poems i can relate to. this guy nick...went out with my best friend and i knew the whole time he liked me more than her..and they broke up and he finally told me after like a month that he had liked me the whole time...and then we were together for 2 months and everything was great...i had never felt better! he all of a sudden one day out of no where broke up with me...so i know what you feel like! great job on the poem! 5/5

Oh wow, deep
i love how slowly but surly the poem grows and grows and finaly BAM it hits you...i have had this happen
^_^ great job

Aww hunnie ): i can feel your pain. *hugs you tight.
xxx.

Aweehh..I can relate to this A LOT!!...I'm missing someone too for about 4 or 5 months now...it sucks..but I love this poem! <3..great write..=]

Wow i loved it
me and my bf jus broke up yesterday he had been goin out wit my best friend then they broke up then lik 3 months later he asked me out and said he had liked me since him and my best friend wuz goin out well monday wuz 3 weeks and he jus said its over

This poem is amazing!! i loved it and its something i can definitly relate to.
your rhymes went very well together..everything was very well written
5/5!

Good poem dearry. every poem has a deep meaning with in ones heart. i guess alot of people goes through thier lives with broken hearts of pain and misfitted love with in their hearts. .. you really captured my heartt dear. brought tears to my eyes. even in its length... it was amazing

Simply AMAZING <3 I'm in love with your poem.. It touched me in every single way.. I know exactly how it feels when your see the one you love with another girl, holding her or simply talking about her.. it's like your heart is breaking to a million pieces and you cant do anything to stop it ...
5/5
take care x

Its realy true i feel it in ur write i love ur feeling and how u turn it in to few words
keep ur work up

This was really good, it really sounds like you write directly from the heart... not dressing up anything too much, and that's admirable! 5/5 Keep writing and your freed desires will help fulfill your dreams!

Cheers,
Richard

Great poem ^^

:Holds up big sign that says GO YOU!:

XD

:AND THE CROWED GOES WILD RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA:

XD

asomeness poem! ^^ liked it allot

:two thumbs up:

keep up the great work ^^ best one I read all day ^^

5/5