Excellent!

Very inspirational, it rhymes so well!

keep it up!

Lovely! wonderful flow, and nice topic. i love the way you repeated some of the first stanza again at the end. nice work.

I see a parallel. "God always sends rainbows after the rain".

The thing I love about poems like these is that there is always enough unexplained lines to let the reader interpret the poem in their own eyes.

I see the rainbow as something to be happy about, something to make someone feel full when seeing a rainbow, to feel... blissful.
I see the rain as desolate tears, pain, gloomy emotions of being sad.

If I am correct, the last line is PERFECT for the poem for the parallel would mean that "God always sends you happiness when you are sad".

Wow. Amazing.

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_Sam

This is an amazing poem. everything flows together as all yur poems do. maybe u could come check ,mine out and tell me what think. and ill continue reading urs.

Ya thats true.love you an!!! good job!!! miss you.