Comments : Pearls

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Great usage of words, well penned..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    So emotional and deep. Very original idea for poem and you wrote it excellently. I don't like just on line in whole piece, and that is a fourth line in first stanza it somehow doesn't fir. Rest of this poem is fantastic, you entwined superb imagery with amazingly described feelings. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Unique and Penned Beautifully.

    This poem was deep and very powerful. You described the feelings excellently. And used very descriptive words.

    Keep it up.
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    GASDGLKAJSDGLK.

    No lie, it's flawless.
    I absolutely love it.
    It's like perfect.
    NominationANDfavoritepoems. (: