Wow. powerful poem, very well written 5/5

Wow!! like the comment above me, very very powerful. this poem is very very good!! its great. i cant even describe how great. its just that meaningful. great job! 5/5

Excellent!

very descriptive..reality is such a shit..im afraid that someday we will end up in destruction..

keep it up!

Dam sista! u got soul! lol. nice poem.