Good poem. Nice structure. I liked the topic though it was a little bit disturbing. I loved how you asked questions in it as well.

-Shannon <3

Good poem..i like it...check mine leave a comment i will appreciate it

I really like this...it was very good. it made it even more intresting with the questions...great job.

if you could or would like please check out some of my poems. that would be happily appreciated!

BabyGurl

Wow good poem i liked this part"I am a poser.
So often I cover myself up with smiles and happy laughter,
or perhaps depressed laughter." another5/5 you r awsome!!

Wow, i really liked that poem!!! i think it was great how at first you were saying you were pain, and then in the end you were happy. good job!!! :-)

All i can say is that you know how to put ur emotions and thoughts so deeply and well written into a superb poem!!...luvd it
keep up the gr8 writes
tk care
bree