Hey, pretty good even if it was short.

your servant:
david

This is a great poem, Dawn. It conveys a whole lot of feeling in minimal words - a very tricky thing to master.

I'd love to go over it line by line and offer you some suggestions if you don't mind. I can send them to you in private message.

Let me know.

Hope you enjoy your stay here, and I can't wait to see more of your poems!

Wow beautiful poem 5/5

This is very good you should keep righting I give this a 5/5

Really quite good!
You have a good use of words and i think you should put some more up for people like me to read :)!

6/5 haha :)