I like it
its really good kyle

Wow
i hope the people who do drink read thiss
cuz this is so real and true

Great message and everyone should read this if they drink....so many people have died due to this when it can be stopped! It gets me so mad! Great write!

Brooke<3

Great messege. It's very good.

Wow, that was really good!!!! when i was reading it, my eyes got watery. great job!!!! :-)

Great Poem!! And a very wise message! Excellent Writing!! =)

5.5**
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The heart behind this poem was big.
A few things like spelling could be changed,
but other than that, this poem was amazing.
Recently, my friend was hurt and is still in the hospital,
A boy that had been drinking and driving a motorcycle hit her,
and now she has head injuries.
That boy was only 16, and now he is dead.
What people do still amazes me.

Good write, keep it up. x

(claps) Bravo!
dat was a beautiful poem you actually had something to say a message to get across to ppl who don't think abot the concequences & wat der actions could do to others. Loved it!
5/5

Wow i really liked this poem, it had great meaning. great job!!

This poem made me cry. your so true saying this has happend b4. my cuzin was in critcal condition for a while n dies 3 times but was brough back to life. all cause of a driver drinkin and ran into him head on.,, thank u so much for writin this poem!!! i rated this a 5. keep up the good work