Comments : Bottled Up

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Nice poem with smooth transition 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    simple but so unique..i enjoyed reading this one..
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I love your poetry very much, thanks for posting one! :) I liked it very much, the rhyming came easy out of my mouth when I spoke it outload. Hope you are doing well.
    Nicole