The way I feel

by Tylor   Sep 16, 2007


I love the way you look at me,
Each and every day,
How even though my heart speeds up,
You take my breath away..

I love how you see right through me,
In the times I am so mean,
I swear to you I Love You so much,
Even if it goes unseen..

A deceiving smile,
Once in a while is shown,
To make you happy,
Even though I feel so alone..

The feeling that burdens me,
Riping through my soul,
Is holding onto our love,
Even though your letting go..

I will do anything now,
To get rid of this pain,
Its to much to endure,
I swear I'm going insane..

I wish you the best though,
Anything else is obsolete,
Find someone who makes you happy,
Someone who makes you complete..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Aww great work
    powerfully written..
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by LiveTogetherDieAlone

    Hey nice poem .. good job done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    "I wish you the best though,
    Anything else is obsolete,
    Find someone who makes you happy,
    Someone who makes you complete.."

    ^^WOW!...this part just made my heart melt, and the whole poem in itself is amazing! Fantastic write!

    Brooke<3