5/5

strong topic, nicely worded, flows quite well
But an all round 2 thumbs up for the meaning

keep it up
xoxo

Wow, incredible poem. It is so powerful and deep. Very true too. I like the topic and you wrote it greatly. You also created excellent atmosphere and imagery is superb. Well done! This piece really deserves 5/5

Wow loved that poem,was absolutely great
keep it up!
take care,Lisa

Hey love this poem :) First one I read of yours and its amazing!

W0nd3rful! Loved it =D

Wow! I love it! It's soo deep and really expressive. Geat job!