Wow that was really strong good job....

Thanx

Your poem is fantastic its coming from your heart well done keep up the great poems

Aww..thanx i appreciate it,

Wow good!

Very nice poem. It's very sad, but it's always better to come out on paper. As poets and writers, we are lucky to have that outlet. Many people in their teenage years have the same exact feelings, but someone don't have any outlet but the knife, and I'm always glad to see someone writing about it to let others know that they are not alone. It's a stage we all must pass but it can be very lonely and unfortunately no one can help. A person needs to find what they are looking for in life on their own. Thanks for your writing, and I hope others benefit from it. Thanks for a great read.

Basse