Awesome! i love this one, and i must admit that the title did have a strong and rather strange hold on me. keep writing! ^_^

Good poem. =]]
5/5

amanda.

Wow... its kinda.. well really sad... but i have to say that it is very good

Its slightly sad but in a way it makes sense....
Don't ask me what I mean cause I'm not sure either but thats the feeling I get from this poem.

Nadia

5/5