Comments : Your voice

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written piece, very interesting. I think that you should capitalize I, except that the rest of the poem is great.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Your voice says who you are
    thats what people say
    with the little i have heard
    i'll tell you yours today -

    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Great poem! & thanks for the comment. :] much appreciated.

  • 16 years ago

    by ThreeSixtyChanges

    Nice poem, i like it!

    thx for rating my poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow...this explans so much in my life. Thatwas beautiful please keep writing....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Alone

    Wow really deep, so good thanx for the comment on my poem too, this is me saying thanx, I return the fave :)

    -Thorn (Mia)