Hey,
an awesome poem, I like that you repeat the title in every stanza, its a nice effect. the flow is good and I enjoyed reading your poem. 5/5
kisses stephanie

Wow, I can honestly say this is the best poem I've read today. It is compelling. I was drawn right into the anguish and sadness. You did a terrific job.

-Astryd

Great poem

Interesting. i liked it alot.it had a wonderful flow and rythm. if i could id give it a 7/5.

Another great of your repetition poems. Another poem of things I fear. Great job. 5/5

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