Comments : Heartache

  • 16 years ago

    by marilyn marti

    Simply put: WOW.
    It was a really good poem..i felt the hurt and the pain and the frustration just jumping off the page! i loved it! especially since i feel the EXACT same way! i gave up something soooo special for a guy that didnt care about me and now im just left hanging on to that regret..its sooo sad..so i really understand and enjoy the poem...amazing job..5/5...take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    From the dreadful nightmare
    Where her and him is all I see
    So I pray, when I finally wake
    That he'll belong to me

    omg..
    my life at the moment in 4 lines

    absolutly fantastic
    and i know exactly how you feel
    and it gets to me all the time

    this blew me away
    FANSTATIC!

    Marissa