What a beautiful yet tragic poem...really nicely written the emotion shows

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ItS aN interestinG feelingS... donE verY nicelY... mY deepesT regardS 4 yR expressionS... 5/5 keeP iT uP anD writE morE....

Wow, u kept it nice.. Seein and feeling emotions but very good, extense thought! Love it!

Wow. sad at the end, great word choice when describing!!
Have you ever seen a butterfly pass you by?
Have you ever noticed me walk by and sigh?

Sometimes i feel like i don't exist,
or like I've faded away into mist

incredible writing!!! :):)

It'S s0 amaZing!!!
iT geTs riGht int0 my heaRt!
c0ngrats =]
P.S.: niCe uSername! haHah xD

Wow... a l.. ovely poem again...

Keep writing

Best wishz... karan

That was great .
I like the first two stanzas the best i believe..
but its hard to say, cause i loved it all :)
keep it up !

This is beautiful yet sad. It's not nice not to be loved back but as you wrote the ove you have for the person that won't/can't love you back slowly starts to disappear. Well writen, 5/5. Em