I kinda liked this, simply because your exposed your feelings so true.
The only thing I think I would have changed is to devide your writing into stanza's.
Now it just seems like one big write simply because the poem is quite long, it looks like it came out of a diary or something. On another hand that can have his charming as well.
Anyway it's just a suggestion :)
Overall good write.

4/4

xo angelique

Wow, i see they way u just kind of expressed ur feelings with this, and i liked it. all of the things u said were so true