Nice piece. I never like when the reader tries cutting or hurting themself though I'm not entirely sure that's what you meant. But I do understand the pangs of heartache, and you made that overwhelmingly clear in this piece. The I love you, I hate you lines really show the confusion.
I'm uncomfortably numb
Worn and tattered
My life is destroyed
The pieces are scattered
For this one, honestly Im nose bleeding right now, I love the word usage and conveyed on it, it really describe your concept so right. Every lines have a true message on it and that great! this one is awesome!