Comments : Goodbye My Heart

  • 12 years ago

    by Broken screams

    I love this poem!!
    extremly good :)
    keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by LovexMe

    This is a very good poem,
    i added it to my favourites, kay?
    ( v )
    v

    --trinity

  • 12 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice piece. I never like when the reader tries cutting or hurting themself though I'm not entirely sure that's what you meant. But I do understand the pangs of heartache, and you made that overwhelmingly clear in this piece. The I love you, I hate you lines really show the confusion.

    I'm uncomfortably numb
    Worn and tattered
    My life is destroyed
    The pieces are scattered

    That is my favorite stanza. Great job!
    Charisma*

  • 12 years ago

    by Kyle

    WHoa!!!!! one of the best poems ive read so far!! i loved it...and its so sad. i can truly relate to your message in your poem. i loved these lines...they really shot out to me....

    take this bleeding heart
    rip it from my chest
    save my last breath
    you can have whats left....

    amazing. your whole poem amazing...you wrote it so well with such powerful emotion and it turned out great. great job!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    For this one, honestly Im nose bleeding right now, I love the word usage and conveyed on it, it really describe your concept so right. Every lines have a true message on it and that great! this one is awesome!

    Keep on rocking!