Nice poem i enjoyed it

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Hey

What you sorry for?

I get what you mean about how it all just comes flooding out and you need to jot it down on paper.

Those poems are the best becuase they are so raw, just pure emotion, anger, pain, bitterness thats what they are full off and its good to write about - very theruputic if you will lol.

Anyways i think this poem is great. I really do, it is jumbled but that reflects how all your emtions and head is at the moment - i think. You get the pain across well and the bitterness about how you are a good guy but seem to get stomped on as a reward.

I guess it shows nice guys finish last.

Great poem, i loved it, Take care.

Kelly
xx

Aaww why the sad ending. every husband should hav one. keep writing:)

Awe. i liek it. 5/5.

I understand completely about the way a poem can just pour from your mind like that
And i can tell this one has because it just so raw with emotion.
Let me tell you a secret... good guys always get what they derserve hun, so just be patient =)
5/5
*Gem*

You pour out so much depth and feeling here! 5/5
Sorry I haven't checked out your poems lately.

Loved this poem! Ive been gone for a while and coming back to see another one of your great poems has really put a smile on my face.

This is so sad, bro, but you're an amazing writer and an amazing person. Don't ever think different. 5/5

Sad, but very fine writing....keep up the good work.
:) Mary

Wow, cool man very nice poem and full of emotions

i can relate to it

keep writting