Ooooo i like =]

Great job...i liked it alot....very well written..~*~Cindy~*~

It was an okay poem, flow is a little rocky and you have some minor errors in the poem.

Ill = I'll :)

Anyway you have potential to improve so never stop writing! :)

Thanks for the comment on my poems.

This is very sweet! 5/5
keep it up!