Gah! I hate you. :[[
You make all my writing look terrible. Lol. Fabulous job, as always. & I'm glad that you're writing "happy" poems again. :)
5.5

- Steph <3

I think this is a wonderful and well written piece. The flow was flawless, and word usage was right on point. Emotive, raw, sincere, a great write!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Beautiful purpose and word choice. I really enjoy to reaed love poems becuase love is such a wonderful topic. 5/5

Very well written,
i think the word is "duct tape"instead of dutch tape,just pointing that out.
great work nonetheless.
keep it up!

Aww. A sweet lovely, poem of despair. The first two lines reminded me of "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe. I guess it was the "nevermore". That brought that thought to my head. It flowed very well, and I can relate, as I'm sure most people can.

Oh yes, "dutch tape" is suppose to be "duct tape" just a minor error. :]]

Much love,
Cayce xx

I liked this poem its so good. wow yo make my writing look so bad right know but you have a gift keep up the good work...