Comments : Crystallised Mirror Reflection {Contest}

  • 12 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    this piece is very powerful

    keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by jyzka

    Nice poem! touching!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Greta, how sad am i am that you have left PFP.
    But you entered this in the september contest and came third.
    I thought it was sad, well written with emotion, you did a lovely job.
    Love always, Tara-Kay
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    This heart has lost all grace,
    A mind that's out of place,
    Green eyes that see through vanity,
    My thoughts of cheap insanity.

    awwwwwwww. it was such a sad poem. and brought a tear from my eyes. what a lovely work
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nix

    To be honest, I don't like rhyming in this one too much... That is just my opinion but it seems little forced, anyway you described emotions nicely and whole piece is filled with many feelings.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Excellent poem
    You had a brilliant rhyming flow
    5/5

    =]

  • 12 years ago

    by Poseur

    I especially liked the line--for the silence speaks a million words, and i'll continue to walk backwards--thats awsome.

    but i agree with dark spirit. the rhyming was kinda forced.

    but other than the rhyming--very powerful. niice work.