Excellent!

this piece is very powerful

keep it up!

Nice poem! touching!

Greta, how sad am i am that you have left PFP.
But you entered this in the september contest and came third.
I thought it was sad, well written with emotion, you did a lovely job.
Love always, Tara-Kay
x

This heart has lost all grace,
A mind that's out of place,
Green eyes that see through vanity,
My thoughts of cheap insanity.

awwwwwwww. it was such a sad poem. and brought a tear from my eyes. what a lovely work
5/5

To be honest, I don't like rhyming in this one too much... That is just my opinion but it seems little forced, anyway you described emotions nicely and whole piece is filled with many feelings.

Excellent poem
You had a brilliant rhyming flow
5/5

=]

I especially liked the line--for the silence speaks a million words, and i'll continue to walk backwards--thats awsome.

but i agree with dark spirit. the rhyming was kinda forced.

but other than the rhyming--very powerful. niice work.