Comments : Never over you

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Hey gurl,you gave me a comment so I figured I'd read some of your poems and Imma comment back on this one-I can really relate to it...I'm so sorry for the pain it sounds like you been thru.This poem is really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by BeLLa

    All i have is WOW !
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "And hope you grow" << It kinda threw me off maybe " and, hope THAT you grow" ?

    "So alone, so betrayed
    Is how I feel
    It's all sinking in now
    This is all real"
    ^^ Is how I feel, This is all real..
    Ruin the flow of that stanza.

    This is a good poem, many can relate to it, I'm sure.
    And, it shows WHY you should NEVER change at all, for anyone.

    I'm sure he began 'liking/loving' you for who you were, and you began to change which is why.

    Amazing job. (:
    5/5