That was really long but beautifully written and a joy to read because it came from your heart....5/5

by the way thanks for the comment....

Awww.
i know how you feel saffie.
*hugg
great poem hun.
xxx.

Great Poem one of the best i've read.

This poem is very sad but amazing!!
You managed to describe the same feelings I had when my grandma died..it was quite sad.
But you're fabulous
Take good care of you
I miss you and I love you so much
xxx

Thi one is really good... loved it =)

Awww, thats so sad.
it makes me think of the family memebers i've lost (including my nan) your words of pain are very sad, and very, very, very touching. xxxxxxxxx

"I'm sorry for cutting and wanting to die" .
"I'm going to end my life that night
cos i know I'll lose this fight
i really need you to understand why
i have chose the option to die." Sorry to hear about your loss. I am happy you are still here with us, keep up the good work.

Wow. I thought that was so beautifully written. It had so much emotion behind it. I loved it. You're an amazing writer.

Thanks for the comment!

This is beautiful and really sweet i like it alot

She certainly set a good example for you which maybe you will be able to duplicate, this would be the greatest gift you could give her. I'm sure she will be watching.

Wow.. it was long.. but so well written.. it kept your attention!.. it came from the heart nd thts what matters most.. I loved it!!.. you are a fabulous writter!!.. nd thanks for the comment!!..

Heyy iv been lookin at a few of yoor poems theyr soo good
yoor an awesome writter
well written!

all yoor poems ar from th heart which i love about them sorry if that how yoo feel
5/5
oh and btw thankies for commenting my poem =]

Wow this is so sad. its unbelievably long but straight from the heart. well done xx

I feel for you .. this is so touching .. i almost feel like crying, though, i havent felt the sorrow and agony you went through when your gran died, i still feel the pain.. ( im sorry for you loss ) .. nice work, though ... :)

Very deep. Moving. Straight from the heart.

Saffie, you just made a grown man cry, brilliant poem, keep up the very good work!!
well done.

By the way i saw yor name saffie on another comment, if i'm right in asuming that, if not sorry :(
once again well done!