This is an excellent poem 5/5 its very heart felt, and beautiful to read. well done, your an excellent writer

Wow. this is amazing.

Good job! I really like...but a litle advice...nxt time you should try to make a title intead of Untitled..lol or is that the actual title? Idk..but it was really job! One more word of advise..BELIEVE in what you write! Believe its good! Trust me it will make so much more of a difference! Awesome work!