Awesome poem. I loved it mostly cause its unique. Your word choice was great and painted a beautiful picture of past memories. You also described the feeling so well of nostalgia. The poem had great flow as well and great metaphors. Wonderful job..keep it up! 5/5

Wow this poem is so cool. the words flow really well and it has alot of feeling in it!
iLOVEit!
keep up the great work!!
:)
5/5

Hey that was great! It was different and the words you used were very powerful. I was really pulled into that poem... words to critique there arent really any, the flow and emotion was amazing! Keep up the amazing work!

I love this poem
it feels so real
something like this happened to me

This was absolutely beautiful. It was very well written and drug me into it. It actually made me picture myself as that girl. Wonderful job. Keep it up!!!!! 5/5

I saw your poem as beautiful. It was written very well and your poem was filled with metaphors which is always a plus for me. very refreshing.

Write more!

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_Sam