This was really pretty yet sad at the same time. It flowed together perfectly and I absolutely loved it.5/5

Capitalize your I's, dear.

other than that it's another great poem.
i liked this one better than the other one, eh.
and, it flowed better, the emotion was better, it was great (:

keep it up.

A great poem, written greatly
keep up the great work like always.

That was so sad!
I could feel your pain
Great job!
Loved the word choice yet again!

This poem brought tears to my eyes. i can relate to this poem alot. it hurts knowin u know how things should b but yet it never will happen. this poem tells the story of love and its so true. keep it up

Aw, this is such a beautiful poem. I loved the emotion coming out of this. The flow fit just perfect with the poem. Great job! 5/5

*Cindy*

I loved it! I could relate with every emotion and the flow was amazing. Nothing seemed forced and I was hooked from beginning to end. Beautifully done *5/5*

This reminds me of the song Tear Drops On My Guitar. I don't know why the story just seems similar. Another amazing write. The words you chose were great and every line was clear. What more can I say you have so much talent

This poem is reminding me my situation with a guy. I know how it feels to be invisable to a guy. good job