Well written, really heavy in emotion (thats good) loved reading it, flows really well and nothing seems forced, again i loved reading this.

Nice work, flows beautifully. 5/5

I do all these thingz. "/
i hide behind a mask.
i fake smilez && force laughter.
i hold bakk tears.
&& act as though im alright.
when im really not.
but no one can see past the fakeness.
&& see th real mehh. "/
so maybe ill just hide forever. "/

i really like this poem.
5/5.

Swettie......this one is realy sad.... huhuhu.i hope your always fine there.. =) great job BAbY.... *hug you*

5/5 -bryan

I like poem, but the ending wasnt what i expected. good flow though.

I sometimes wish that you will find true happiness soon
well, not sometimes but always ^_^

nice poem and it expresses alot

For a 14 years old girl, it is amazing!!!

Pretty great one. Really love it!!

Diz is deep i loved it.............good job!!! i hate dat shit happends like dat!!!!!check my poems out and comment for...............

Diz is deep i loved it.............good job!!! i hate dat shit happends like dat!!!!!check my poems out and comment for...............

Diz is deep i loved it.............good job!!! i hate dat shit happends like dat!!!!!check my poems out and comment for...............

You are really good at portarying the emotions in your poems. this one is really nice. 5/5

Absolutely wonderful. I don't think I would ever be able to write a poem about suicide and this is a great poem on explaining it. 5/5

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